I recently entered a poetry contest sponsored by a writers’ group of Facebook. The group has over 117,000 members, although I have no idea how many write poetry or how many submitted to the contest. The bit that has lit up my day is one of my pieces took third place.
The judges were quite complementary, creating near poetry in their assessment:
Beautifully constructed, crafted, and paced with the gentleness of velvet. Like an oasis of life in a barren desert. A lovely poem to consider and think upon
Here, then, is the poem:
To be a giver of flight
Fuel the puff that lifts the wing
To loose the cords
That bind the imagination
And watch the creature
Thus inspired
Grow before your very eyes.
A taste of pride
That must have been
Endured by gods of old
And yet a deep humility
To understand
What small and timely
Gifts of self
A word, a thought,
A helping hand
Can spur a destiny.
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